Tips to assess if your German text needs editing:
You vs. Du / Sie
In German there are different ways to address people. The fist thing to check is that it your text is consistent in translating "You" into "Du" or "Sie" (Note: "sie" can also mean "she or they", depending on the context).
The informal "Du" is generally used to address a younger audience. The lifestyle and fitness brands also use it regularly in their advertisement.
The formal "Sie" is the predominant way to address your customers correctly (Note: "Sie/You" is capitalized while "sie/she/they is not).
Capitalized letters
In German, all nouns (and some adjectives) have to be capitalized. This is a good indicator to see if your text might benefit from editing.
Phrases / Humor
The use of phrases is very common in German speaking countries. Unfortunately, the phrases from other areas often do not make sense after translation.
The same applies to humoristic content.
If your text is using phrases or humor to present your product or company, you may want someone to double check if the meaning is the same in German.
The vs. der / die / das
One of the biggest difficulties for non-native speakers (and marketers) is the gendered language, in which "The" has to be correctly translated into "der" / "die" or "das".
Even though it is not perfect: If you want to quickly check if your text is correct, put the article and the following Noun into a search engine and look if it offers a correction.
Having a native german to function as your german marketing translator, can help you to be more successful in the german market.
Do not hesitate to contact me, whether you already have a text in German to review/edit, or to have your text translated into German.